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Really a very cohesive haiku… I can almost fell the spirit of the windy day, blowing down from the clouds to reach the orange leaves… Good height progression achieved through the poetic images… Great!, Cheers Freya,
Aquileana 🙂
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Really a very cohesive haiku… I can almost fell the spirit of the windy day, blowing down from the clouds to reach the orange leaves… Good height progression achieved through the poetic images… Great!, Cheers Freya,
Aquileana 🙂
thank you Aquileana for your detailed feedback – much appreciated!
ominous grey clouds
omens of weather to come
nature supports life
oh I like this! thank you meandtheboss!
beautiful Haiku, Freya.
thank you Francina!