11 – 22

south-east wind throws up
clouds, sullen-grey backdrop to
orange, rustling leaves.
© Freya Pickard 2013
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6 Responses to 11 – 22

  1. Aquileana says:

    Really a very cohesive haiku… I can almost fell the spirit of the windy day, blowing down from the clouds to reach the orange leaves… Good height progression achieved through the poetic images… Great!, Cheers Freya,
    Aquileana 🙂

  2. ominous grey clouds
    omens of weather to come
    nature supports life

  3. Francina says:

    beautiful Haiku, Freya.

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