metal souls at war
fed on bullets and dressed with
that crimson water.
© Vinati Bhola 2014
Welcome to Pure Haiku’s first ever “feature haiku writer” week. This week I will be posting two more of Vinati’s haiku on Wednesday and Friday. You can read more of Vinati’s inspirational poetry at beguiling life
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what a horrible sight that must be!
🙂
Really touching…
“Crimson water and metal sould fed on bullets”…
Those poetic images were marvelous, Freya…
Congratulations on your poetry, cheers,
Aquileana 🙂
Thank you Aquileana – it’s actually haiku by Vinati Bhola – I’m featuring her work this week…
Okay… Yes I have now noticed that… Cheers Freya, Aquileana 🙂
🙂
I chose this haiku because it vividly portrays the violence of war without being graphic or gory.
Thank you so much for featuring me, Freya.
You made my day!
it’s pleasure Vinati! I’m looking forward to your haiku on Wednesday and Friday too!