5 – 9

hedge leaves shudder, shake
like dragon twisting, hints of
summer fade; cold wind
© Freya Pickard 2014
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7 Responses to 5 – 9

  1. Mike says:

    Very imaginative allusion. Nice work.

  2. Libby says:

    Oh, dragons hiding the the hedgerows. I hope they are friendly!

  3. Aquileana says:

    I loved the opposed images at the end. Quite ambiguous and yet accurate (that´s the effect poetry may achieve).
    Best wishes, Freya,
    Aquileana 😛

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