4 – 13

raw primal notes ripped
torn from reversed screaming strings;
Hendrix’s anthem
© Freya Pickard 2015
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7 Responses to 4 – 13

  1. purehaiku says:

    this is of course Jimi Hendrix playing his national anthem, making the guitar weep….

  2. A powerful one. 🙂

  3. I started out feeling disturbed by the first two lines, then hit Hendrix’s anthem and the whole thing flipped on it’s head. Great haiku!

  4. The Manoj Arora says:

    Absolutely awesome. Especially the second line.

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