4 – 15

not a breath of wind
the world waits on tenterhooks
until the song ends
© F Franklin 2015

Frank enjoys the classical form of haiku and you can read more at Alina Meridon

11 Responses to 4 – 15

  1. purehaiku says:

    this haiku stood out for me because of the words and phrasing…

  2. Nicely done and I will check out Frank’s site ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Noora says:

    What a wonderful piece! I’m a huge fan of Frank’s haiku!!

  4. I can feel the suspense and hear the song through the silence. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Frank says:

    Reblogged this on Francis James Franklin (Alina Meridon) and commented:
    Freya Pickard shares my love of 5-7-5 haiku and her ‘pure haiku’ blog is dedicated to it. Recently she called for submissions on a musical theme and has been posting her favourites. Here is one of mine…

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