not a breath of wind
the world waits on tenterhooks
until the song ends
© F Franklin 2015
Frank enjoys the classical form of haiku and you can read more at Alina Meridon
Frank enjoys the classical form of haiku and you can read more at Alina Meridon
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this haiku stood out for me because of the words and phrasing…
Nicely done and I will check out Frank’s site ๐
thank you Christy! very glad you’re interested enough to check out Frank’s site – that’s what all this sharing is all about!
What a wonderful piece! I’m a huge fan of Frank’s haiku!!
thank you Noora for taking the time to read and comment – much appreciated!
I think this is one of my best. Happy you liked it. ๐
thank you for letting me use your haiku here on pure haiku!
I can feel the suspense and hear the song through the silence. ๐
oh good! I’m glad you liked Frank’s haiku as much as I did!
I wish I could remember what I was listening to at the time…
Reblogged this on Francis James Franklin (Alina Meridon) and commented:
Freya Pickard shares my love of 5-7-5 haiku and her ‘pure haiku’ blog is dedicated to it. Recently she called for submissions on a musical theme and has been posting her favourites. Here is one of mine…