10-11

and she seemed to die
as her colour changed she fell
fall is upon us
© M Sakran 2016
M Sakran has had 5 haiku previously published here at Pure Haiku. He was hoping one of his leaf submissions would be accepted… He has two places you can follow him:- M Sakran Website and M Sakran Blog.
I enjoyed the play on words and the references to death in this layered haiku.
This haiku is part of my LEAF series.
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2 Responses to 10-11

  1. merrildsmith says:

    This is like a story from mythology told in a few words. Beautiful.

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