10-12

storm ripped him from branch
but gave him wings to soar, then
softly laid to sleep
© Sharmishtha Basu 2016
Sharmistha is a prolific poet with many collections. Her latest project is a magazine called agnishatdalezine.
I liked the contrasting beginning and end and the perpetual motion in the haiku.
This haiku is part of my LEAF series.
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4 Responses to 10-12

  1. Reblogged this on Agnishatdal The Ezine and commented:
    Thank you Freya!

  2. A feeling of peace at the end. Nice one, Trisha. 🙂

  3. merrildsmith says:

    There is so much action in this–and power–but then it ends so gently. Beautiful.

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