1 – 4

caring for my breath
travelled with my mind inside
met me without ‘I’
© Shalini Singh 2017

Shalini says of herself that “I write poetry which finds me and reads you”. She has a blog at Packing Life in Words

I loved the last line of this senyru and enjoyed the mindfulness within it.
This haiku is part of my CARE series.
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2 Responses to 1 – 4

  1. Thanks Freya for liking my senryu! The last line is misprinted. It’s ‘met me without I’

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