3 – 8

from dark drowsiness

through layers of consciousness

I slowly awake


© Freya Pickard 2019


This haiku is part of our Emergence theme.

20 Responses to 3 – 8

  1. Susi Bocks says:

    I loved the imagery of this but also, it made me think of the movie “Inception”. 🙂

    • purehaiku says:

      thank you, Susi! I’ve never seen inception! this haiku was inspired by how I felt when recovering from chemo treatment 5 years ago…

      • Susi Bocks says:

        If you like science fiction/drama, I’d recommend it to you. When you witness the concept of different levels of experiencing “existence”, it lines up with how you mentioned coming up through the layers.

        I’m sorry to hear you had to deal with chemo. But glad you are here! I’m gathering the prognosis is good?

      • purehaiku says:

        it’s on my list to watch! at the moment, yes, everything’s looking good thanks! xxx

      • Susi Bocks says:

        🙂 Yay! And I’m glad things are good!

  2. Aha! If you read them in order of posting, they all flow together, an emerging story in five haiku, four writers. Cool assemblage! Magic.

  3. memadtwo says:

    I know that feeling…(K)

  4. Dan Brook says:

    I love this! So real, so universal.

  5. Good writing. Got me pondering.

  6. JanBeek says:

    Welcome to the emergence into a new day!

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