chip, chip, chip away
escape from shell to freedom
imminent release
© Susi Bocks 2019
Join Susi at I Write Her – let’s discover poetry and our humanity together!
This haiku is part of our Emergence theme.
chip, chip, chip away
escape from shell to freedom
imminent release
© Susi Bocks 2019
Join Susi at I Write Her – let’s discover poetry and our humanity together!
This haiku is part of our Emergence theme.
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
The first line is so inspired!!! Bellissimo!!!
xoxoxo
I like the change of rhythm. (K)
Excellent haiku!
Excellent take on emergence. Yup, it takes determination and just chip chip chippin’ away! 👍🏽
Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
Very thankful to Freya Pickard for showcasing this piece on Pure Haiku. It was a wonderful prompt which filled me with so many thoughts! I look forward to reading all the other writers pieces on the Emergence theme. 🙂
thank you for submitting your work, Susi!
Thank you for the opportunity!! 🙂