Determined

chip, chip, chip away

escape from shell to freedom

imminent release

 

© Susi Bocks 2019

 

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This haiku is part of our Emergence theme.

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8 Responses to Determined

  1. The first line is so inspired!!! Bellissimo!!!
    xoxoxo

  2. memadtwo says:

    I like the change of rhythm. (K)

  3. JanBeek says:

    Excellent take on emergence. Yup, it takes determination and just chip chip chippin’ away! 👍🏽

  4. Susi Bocks says:

    Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
    Very thankful to Freya Pickard for showcasing this piece on Pure Haiku. It was a wonderful prompt which filled me with so many thoughts! I look forward to reading all the other writers pieces on the Emergence theme. 🙂

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